Changes to Chapter 4

[Rogo]

So I said I'd offer an explanation for why I've changed the dialogue on Page 37 and 38 of Chapter 4, which can be viewed at the following links on smackjeeves;

gravston.smackjeeves.com/comics/1088918/page-37/
gravston.smackjeeves.com/comics/1091824/page-38/

Basically the original dialogue strongly implied that Selene was in charge of everything and that Sunflower and David were with-holding information for reasons connected to Selene. I hate to get into spoilers but that was a flat out mistake on my part. I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote that scene as even when I wrote it that was off.

So I've updated the pages to reflect what they should have been originally. I am sorry for this mistake and what is basically a mislead to the audience. I hope my writing doesn't screw up so badly again in the future.

Anyway, thanks for your support and see you all tomorrow

[amyofdarkness]

Hey that's cool, at least you noticed it! I'm planning to re-read through the archives.
Was it something you recalled or were you reviewing your archives? (reviewing one's archives is always a good thing!)

[Rogo]

When writing Chapter 8 I had to look back at all of Sunflower and David's scenes to check. I kind of knew it was wrong but a reread is what made me catch it.

[Feathers]

I honestly forget even what the original was. XD

[Rogo]

Feb 11, 2012 0:45:13 GMT -5 Feathers said:

I honestly forget even what the original was. XD

Essentially Sunflower was implying she and David were intentionally lying to Samuel and Selene implied - no, said out right - that it's because SHE wouldn't allow them to. There was also some nonsense about 'it being time' which... I have no idea what I was smoking that day...

[Feathers]

Oh. LOL One of those odd thinking days, eh? XD